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Solid Metal

pain is (painting) framed in shame, unaware of her own name- i keep mentioning 'it's burning it's stinging'- this art dripping from my heart [lacerated] [penetrated] eye see your spiritsoul torn, (open box filled with coal) how many pieces make a- whole lot has been happening, in & out of my mind searching thru tangled vines just asking the time [in the last place i look i shall] find you're stooped to my level i'm so dishevelled under everything soft is solid metal- i'd much hate to be the last petal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/3/2010 6:01:00 PM
strong write, enjoyed this one.P.D.
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Date: 9/2/2010 2:48:00 PM
quite intense...powerful loved the imagery & metaphor! Light & Love
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