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solid gray clouds saturday morning drear.... red cardinals fight

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/24/2024 10:47:00 AM

So beautiful and soulful, i love this haiku dear sara. As always your work is like a breath of fresh air, so beautiful for the soul. Pleasure reading your work, sending you light always, hope you are doing well

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/24/2024 2:22:00 PM

IE, I'm okay..Husband is sick but better than yesterday. If we make it until in the morning, we will go see a doctor. Sara

Silent One

Date: 3/24/2024 8:12:00 AM

Great imagery here Sara... I like the arrangement of words to deliver your image..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/24/2024 10:20:00 AM

Thank you, SO. Your visit is delightful. Sara K

Tonye George

Date: 3/24/2024 8:02:00 AM

Loved the haiku. Great piece dear Sara. I love when the sky is grey.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/24/2024 10:20:00 AM

Mostly I don't mine cloudy days and some rain but we have had so much of it this winter, Tonye. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/23/2024 3:26:00 PM

a lovely Haiku, Sara K. What an experience--the contrast between the red cardinals against solid gray clouds. This is just a beautiful piece of poetry. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/24/2024 5:05:00 AM

Sara B, delighted that you find something lovely. Well, my husband is still sick so not a very good day or evening. He's still sick this morning. Sara K