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Solemnly I

life has been fine and my dream was to refine. God damn it be like you forever you not. time has comes in no counts with my wish to see what's over the edge, to my surprise a lot said nay, and I wonder why.. Solemnly I promise to remain as I am, in my dream of how soon I will begin to see mine, time has fulfill twice and to my surprise it's rising for the mingle will not jingle...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/22/2011 7:50:00 AM
this is cool, for the mingle will not jingle... I like your wordplay here :)
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Yahaya Chadi
Date: 6/24/2011 2:10:00 AM
i pray for you not jingle with how you mingle.
Date: 6/22/2011 7:45:00 AM
this is cool, for the mingle will not jingle... I like your wordplay here :)
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Date: 6/22/2011 7:42:00 AM
this is cool, for the mingle will not jingle... I like your wordplay here :)
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Date: 6/18/2011 4:43:00 AM
"promise to remain as I am" You fond the "pot of gold". There you go. Very nicely put. You have to love yourself first. Nice message and write.
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Yahaya Chadi
Date: 6/19/2011 4:35:00 AM
thanks ernie i, i thought of something and it made me say what I wrote, nice encouragement from you, wish you glad tidings of bless.
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Yahaya Chadi
Date: 6/19/2011 4:35:00 AM
thanks ernie i, i thought of something and it made me say what I wrote, nice encouragement from you, wish you glad tidings of bless.

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