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Soldiers Nightmare Contest Waking Up From a Nightmare

VIETNAM VET SOLDIER'S NIGHTMARE Another dream – I could not wake – Escape from what would follow-- Grasping for a secret word, the letters stark and hollow-- I was trapped entangled there, Just beyond the reach Of men that could release me Or a hill that could be breached Gunfire was a backdrop Soft and pungent was its sound Fell on me like raindrops--strangely harmless on the ground Smoky gray encased me like a piece of sleeping net Tunnel faces hidden —easy killing, no regret-- Felt terror and the aching for the friends around me cold Standup guys with stalwart hearts--just did what they were told Then my cell phone beeped a beep--- A message had come in .... Now awake I saw your name--- My new day would begin. Victoria Anderson-Throop November 25, 2012 waking from a nightmare contest

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Date: 12/13/2012 2:10:00 PM
RL is often more scary! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/13/2012 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Waking Up" contest Victoria. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2012 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Victoria xx
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Date: 12/12/2012 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear Victoria! Thank you so much for your full support! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/29/2012 10:48:00 PM
Very well composed! Kept me captivated. Well done Victoria. Great write.
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