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Soldier of Fortune

Valencia, a return to the Spanish coast, 1966 Nineteen and running wild, searching Conversation turns to idealism, liberty expiring Port and starboard, hand shake, maybe again Two nights, same bar, Listened to the stories Eleven years since he’d seen home Adventure sets a fire in a young man’s soul A need to spread your wings We’d meet by chance again in Barcelona Sorry mate, need a diversion, see those two. Texas bar, broken chairs, bottle thrown Turmoil and the back door’s open Saw him smile and wave goodbye Yes sir, those two over there, don’t know why Damn that’s funny Never saw him again, unspoken friendship. Just wonder sometimes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/23/2008 3:01:00 PM
nice narrative on a breif friendship. with a posible best friend. like the say "We'll always have Spain" thanks for you comments JHL
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Date: 9/18/2008 5:50:00 PM
Maybe he will read this and remember you. It is a small world after all. Love this captivating recap of a few moments in time, that for some reason, have stuck with you. I like Joseph's idea too. It's that good and worth the try. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/18/2008 5:24:00 PM
sometimes we befriend people that we may never meet, communication is a strong word, sometimes I wonder, sometimes people are brought into your life just for a season, a day a few years, and that is all that is meant to be shared, nice write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/18/2008 2:54:00 PM
This certainly sounds like the beginning of a great short story of the same name. You could certainly pack a lot into this one, especially with your practical military experience. Make it 1500 to 2500 words and submit it to a short story contest. Who knows, you may hit the jack pot. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/18/2008 10:14:00 AM
Remember The TV show by the same name. this was a great piece, well written. enjoyed it.
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