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Since when do you have a say over everything... Ain't your momma teachin you nothing kid ? Here we don't criticize other's opinions. Here we don't over think our selfs as human being. Here we don't let go of our strength and seek for hope later. And you definitely know how to follow the rules ! Our mission needs to be accomplished , cause out there we face the world differently. You don't wanna get caught up in your own skin. Otherwise consequences will be faced. " YOU'RE A SOLDIER ! " We salute those , who has already gone before us , and we thank them for their services and graces neutrality. For God be with us as we continue this journey. For our mission has only now begin. Our pathway may be taught , but we will stick together until the very end. I trust that you'll all in good hands. ( AY CAPTAIN ! )

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Date: 10/4/2016 7:56:00 PM
( AY CAPTAIN ! ) ---Nadia, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Nadia September
Date: 10/7/2016 3:32:00 PM
Oh my gosh SKAT you are sooo nice. Thank you very muchh I really do appreciate your kindness ! :):)
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Nadia September
Date: 10/7/2016 3:27:00 PM
Oh my gosh SKAT you are sooo nice. Thank you very muchh I really do appreciate your kindness ! :):)
Date: 10/2/2016 1:19:00 PM
soldiers take the queens shilling and your stuffed a lyric from a song I like find enclosed one son one medal and a note to say we won ! stephen
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Date: 10/2/2016 12:19:00 PM
- Thank you for your first great poem, Nadia - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Nadia September
Date: 10/4/2016 1:00:00 AM
Hey Anne-Lise ! Thank you so much and I'm glad you like it. :)
Date: 10/1/2016 10:23:00 PM
Yup you a soldier, Nadia,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Nadia September
Date: 10/2/2016 8:04:00 AM
Hey Linda ! Thank you so much for welcoming me. :)

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