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Solar

You can't feel her ice cold heart, well maybe you need a mental pic. Here! Can you see inside my head? Tell me why you answered no. Is it because you know her heart's so cold it'll create the next ice age? Relax I'm not showing you this for no reason. You better wear your fur coat 'cause what I'm about to show you will blow all of you away! Ice cold Winter breeze Shuffling into her heart Like the sun she's gone It's like a Solar Eclipse engulfed her heart. She says she doesn't have a boyfriend anymore. WOW, what a lie, what a dirty trick to pull. I'm trying my best to keep my emotions in check but I'm just a failure at everything I do. I'm not cut out for this. This poetry stuff doesn't help relieve my pain or 'rents from the tent. One after another they all go, like someone set off a suicide bomb just for the hell of it but that's not relevant to the matter of my birthday that's coming up. Hold up I lied about it not being relevant, see my birthday's on September eleventh as if I were going to Heaven, like that show Seventh Heaven. I'm going insane! For some reason I can't stop writing. I have fifteen different poems that I want to show you but I already know the light won't shine upon me or them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/5/2010 9:46:00 AM
So emotional, sorry for the hurt
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Date: 9/4/2010 8:10:00 AM
Well expressed thoughts on Solar, John. enjoyed it
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