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Softly...Gently

softly …gently showering blossom mimicking languidly falling snow falling languidly mimicking blossom showering gently…softly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/16/2010 8:25:00 AM
sharon, I am just going down your row of poems and not finding anything new to respond to, so thanks for your lovely comments to me since yesterday, and yes, sad for me, that passoin poem is pure fiction. I know very little about that topic and was a virgin when I married! (I live in Utah, the only state where that is the "norm") haha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/5/2010 1:58:00 PM
sharon, which is for palindrome contest? I gotta try one of these? I just hope I can be inspired. As for the cinquain contest, I am seeing people actually use the image of HIgh Five and I am gonna feel stupid if he wants us to do that (the description said it could be ANY theme). But I messed up in his last contest and did a funny epidgram while all the winners did serious stuff. ok, I'll look for your blog as I go off. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/2/2010 2:51:00 PM
What an artistic presentation! Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Best wishes in the contest. Keep that pen flowing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 7/2/2010 2:50:00 PM
What an artistic presentation! Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Best wishes in the contest. Keep that pen flowing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 7/2/2010 3:06:00 AM
wow, Sharon--this is an amazing palindrome!! totally loved it--you made it seem so effortless!! and you have a bunch of words here too, but it made total sense super wow!! You'd better make sure this is in your member contest entries, ok???? I'm sure this is another winner! ^_^ --nikko :)
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Date: 7/2/2010 12:30:00 AM
Very picturesque style Sharon.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/1/2010 9:59:00 PM
Hey, is this palindrome. It sure looks it. That is one i've yet to try! Luv, Andrea ps and this is lovely.
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Date: 7/1/2010 10:43:00 AM
Oh...you have opened my eyes....wow...I needed your help once again!! Thank you for making this clear to me....perhaps I need to start from scratch!! I misunderstood the palindrome requirements. You are generous once again Sharon with your knowledge and support! Thanks so much! Love Carrie
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Date: 6/30/2010 6:01:00 PM
Oh, I love this....it reads as softly as it speaks the words....as a snowfall forwards or backwards...........wow!
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Date: 6/30/2010 5:21:00 PM
neat shape and poem!!
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Date: 6/30/2010 12:41:00 PM
Fantastic! I wish yo uwell in the contest!
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Date: 6/30/2010 12:17:00 PM
Just beautiful Sharon, good luck in the contest with this gem >> James
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