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Softly Sensual

As I stared down at the flower in wonder I could see a pool of water at the bottom I wished out loud that I was small enough to be able to dive into its trumpet center When to my surprise up popped a tiny elf that's possible he says to me, just drink this I swallowed it down it tasted of wild berries then, in a flash I shrank until I was elf size Standing on the petal's rim I plunged on in oh the flood of sensation set me tingling it felt as if I was being caressed by many hands everywhere as the water stroked me The heavenly scented water carried me off to a dream place where lovers dally together slowly swimming, senses reeling on overload I startled awake as a raucous bird flew above Looking back into the flower, I glimpsed the elf he gave me a cheeky grin and then he vanished was I just dreaming? Carried by wishful dreams I choose to believe it happened just as I told you written 08/20/2013 by Shadow Hamilton contest Softly Sensual

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Date: 8/24/2013 7:05:00 AM
Lovely work my friend.
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Date: 8/24/2013 7:59:00 AM
dearest M.M I Ty from the bottom of my heart love Shadow xox smiles
Date: 8/20/2013 10:18:00 PM
Your imagination is priceless and so is this sweet write! May all your wishes be granted. Hugs
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Date: 8/21/2013 4:28:00 PM
Hi Cecilia nice of you to take time to read Ty and also for your lovely comment Shadow x smile
Date: 8/20/2013 7:02:00 PM
Hi Linda, Very creative write.. Ken
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Date: 8/20/2013 6:32:00 PM
Full of imagination and very cute I liked this write nicely done.
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Date: 8/20/2013 7:28:00 AM
Superbly written
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:31:00 PM
hi Alozor and ty so much Shadow x smile
Date: 8/19/2013 11:21:00 PM
Nicely done. You have a very active imagination. Great poem
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:34:00 PM
hi PJ it is only our own limits of mind that hold us back set it free and the possibilities are endless ty for reading Shadow x smile
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