Soft Silver

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The Trilinea, one more haiku copycat from Berg‘s Pathways for a Poet, created by Nellie Amos the defining feature is the word “rose” must appear somewhere in the 3 lines.
The Trilinea is:

a tristich, a poem in 3 lines.
syllabic, with syllable count per line, 4/8/4.
rhymed, L1 and L3 rhyme.
composed to include the word “rose”.

Moon doesn't pose Covered by fog's soft silver shroud Sun hasn't touched rose The Trilinea

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/15/2017 9:36:00 AM

and another different form - I recall you mentioning this form, though. Lovely write

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/15/2017 9:55:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by..I think I asked you to try to write one..LOL..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2017 5:40:00 PM

Oh, now I see the definition of the form. It's sure interesting. I'd never have guessed all those rules!! This one has a softer touch than the other I saw.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/9/2017 5:48:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by..Yes, all those rules..LOL..When one thinks that they have one written then there goes one of the rules being disobeyed..Sorta like life..Sara

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/4/2017 4:41:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Mrs Sara. Cool poem:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/4/2017 5:45:00 PM

Ahh!! Thanks for the nice review..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2017 12:59:00 PM

i like this form and you did justice to it with your flowing lines, sara...always fluent, that's you.. huggs and thanks for your insights.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/4/2017 1:19:00 PM

Nette, Thanks for the kind review..I enjoyed trying to write a few of these and they are not so easy or I am dense ..LOL..Sara