Soft Rain

The soft rain is falling Kissing the fog, drifting by Distant thunder is calling The soft rain is falling The gray clouds are crawling All around in the sky The soft rain is falling Kissing the fog, drifting by Heidi Sands 3/27/21

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/3/2021 11:38:00 AM

Heidi, Looking for a gentleness in this week-end. And a soft rain to suit my mood. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/3/2021 11:42:00 AM

I hope you have a gentle , peaceful weekend. Thank you for your visit. Take care and enjoy :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/2/2021 5:53:00 AM

So lovely! I love the 2nd and last line: " Kissing the fog, drifting by" Congratulations on your POTD.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/2/2021 6:06:00 AM

Thank you JCB . I appreciate your kind feedback :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/2/2021 5:29:00 AM

Heidi , what a fantastic write this is, a little delayed in answering due to lots happening in my life ( see please pray with me) Big congratulations on POTD my dear friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/2/2021 6:06:00 AM

Ok, I will look at what you mentioned. I appreciate you taking the time here to comment. Thank you Jennifer :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 4/2/2021 12:48:00 AM

Lovely Heidi, Congratulations on your POTD!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/2/2021 6:05:00 AM

Thank you Sandy :)

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 3/31/2021 2:59:00 PM

Loved it Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/31/2021 3:30:00 PM

Great to hear Smita. Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/31/2021 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. You did a wonderful triolet. Have a blessed day and Easter...............

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/31/2021 2:50:00 PM

Thank you very much Paula. I hope you have a nice Easter :)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 3/30/2021 12:39:00 PM

so beautiful dear Heidi... sending congrats on POTD my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2021 12:44:00 PM

So great to see you Ann. Thank you for your kind comment and thoughts. I hope all is well :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 3/30/2021 7:51:00 AM

I love a triolet and yours is wonderful. Congrats on your POTD.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2021 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne. I hope you have a nice day :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/30/2021 2:48:00 AM

Lovely verse and vision. God bless you and congrats on POTD. Love, Gina

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2021 5:33:00 AM

Thank you Gina. God Bless you too :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/29/2021 9:02:00 PM

This is so beautiful and image-laden, without overwhelming the reader with an excess of verbosity. A FAVE for me, Heidi, and congrats on POTD! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2021 5:32:00 AM

Hi Gershon. Thank you very much for the kind feedback, congrats and FAV. I hope all is well. :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/29/2021 8:39:00 PM

Lovely triolet. Nothing quite so poetic as a "soft rain...falling." Loved your poem and congratulations on POTD!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2021 5:32:00 AM

Thank you very much Milton. I am happy you loved it :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/29/2021 6:44:00 PM

I love everything about the rain. Let it "kiss the fog" This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Heidi, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2021 5:31:00 AM

Thank you very much Brandy. Hugs :)