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Soft Orange Blossoms

These soft orange blossoms are more colorful and fragrant than the velvety, wild roses... hastily clinging to sturdy sunflowers' stems, fretting a danger too real and so imminent. His manly hands attacked her in an orchard of beautiful roses, and she left blood stains on those delicate, scattered petals... who did hear the young virgin's painful cry, subdued by the quails' loud twitter in the shady elms' branches? Some did, but continued to walk and let her die! Her mother wailed under the weeping, embracing elms... they saw her child struggle and despair, but they couldn't help; why did that brutal man raped her and beat her to death? And what kind of punishment he deserves for that cruel act? Wouldn't a just judge be furious and imprison him for life? A light wind detached the soft orange blossoms from the branches, and let them gently fall on her violated body to cover with dignity the purest and youngest blood spilled in the meadow of clovers; God Himself cried from His throne, and sent His angel of mercy to the sorrowful and lamenting earth, which had seen the eyes of innocence. Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 12/30/2009 11:22:00 AM
I wanted to reply to a poem of yours I had not seen from the past. My eyes were drawn by this title. I like the way you used the flowers to discuss the rape and death. I don't know if this was anything but an imaginary death, but as usual, well said. (more typos, do you want to know them?) A fan! andrea
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Date: 12/11/2009 6:45:00 PM
Wow Andrew~ my friend I am saddened by such an act I feel your deep despair in every line. Yes the anger is served justly in this manner such a waste of life taken from this earth! Just sad just saddened. Well written. Love Laura :(
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Date: 12/10/2009 5:07:00 PM
You know I hear you and understand. This is a beautiful and powerful write about a dark subject BUt by doing it this way YOU reaffirmed the "victims" beauty and innocence. Well done! Light & Love
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Date: 12/10/2009 2:13:00 PM
Sad this tale ... your words are tremendous... quite emotional .. much to think about... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry .. so appreciated that u read my poems.. enjoy yours also.. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie...
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Date: 12/10/2009 5:20:00 AM
oh so sad and horrendous act. well written.
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Date: 12/9/2009 4:01:00 PM
I am totally choked. Heart wrenching painful story poem so well written. It is horrible, just horrible. Caroline.
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Date: 12/9/2009 8:38:00 AM
This is heart-wrenching, Andrew! This conjures up all kinds of emotions from sadness to anger! Someone suggested when I wrote a poem about horrible crimes that I was being judgemental- I don't think so. It's reality and people are losing their souls. My words may cut but for awhile, but God's judgement is for eternity! Peace and love, Audrey Great write! Peace and love, Audrey
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