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Soft Green Lakes

Wandering through a garden of moonbeams Wanting to quench loves yearnings, he dreams Knowing somewhere there are soft green lakes Midst hot pink feathers where smoking desires wake Rainbows descend in a vibrant melody In thunderous explosions of sensuality Cracking through his existence to disperse Dimensional desire's in his tempest universe. Starry eyes are blazing with fiery captivation Her angelic face excites an irrevocable elation Having an alabaster smile that is melodic in theme Love's tender threads embroider his dreams. Immortality punches through morns frost Ignited by two shooting stars that crossed. Copyright ©2007 Carole Cookie Arnold

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  1. Date: 12/6/2011 11:34:00 AM
    Congrats on your featured poem this week Carole. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 10:29:00 PM
    Lovely imagery Carole, imaginative rhyming. I admire that. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

  1. Date: 1/12/2010 4:21:00 AM
    Very descriptive and imaginative work in this one. Those two shooting stars would be something else. Keep the creative pen flowing and entertain us with your style. Thanks for the comments on my poem about the cloud that looked like Shriek. It was for fun and escape into never-never land but from a picture. Sara

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 9:58:00 PM
    This is a bit non traditional rhyme, but a great sonnet nonetheless. It's fun to read and very imaginative. Glad I could inform you of your win. haha. Luv, andrea