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Soft Breathes

The air feels thick And warm The light is soft And protective I’m oh so small And hidden between Deep breathes of Warm air and A whisper Or whispers I can’t hear I can’t listen I can’t understand So I wait for you As the light fades To a mist In that mist I saw You But perhaps it’s this Thick air Flowing into my lungs And heart Loosening it till I feel like You could love me But oh I feel so small So very small And I can’t hear But I swear I’m trying.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/20/2014 3:36:00 PM
ANNALIESE, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/20/2014 8:19:00 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2014 6:13:00 AM
I rather like this. :) john.
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