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Socially Awkward

Everyday I wake up, lonely and alone But I don’t mind because it is my safe zone Yeah my life is boring and monotonous But deep inside I want change and I’m furious I want to break the silence but I can't I tried a million times, it was not great Every time I tried to scream, I can’t speak Every time I tried to talk, I feel sick It feels like something grips my throat really tight I want to scream help and I want to fight And then I realized it is just me That creates this stupid fear unruly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/4/2016 5:27:00 AM
It is a wonderful write. 7 out of 7. Keep it up.
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:26:00 AM
"Hi John, Welcome to poetry soup. It is a nice platform to express ur views through poem. It is said that "The arc of love and affection always bends to form a circle of contentment". Here we are tied with a relation of friendship.We are encouraging each other to improve confidence.It is nice to have a friend like u. Wish u a fruitful journey ahead. Take care.......hugs.""
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Date: 4/3/2016 8:53:00 AM
John, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/3/2016 5:38:00 AM
Very good! I like the admission in the last line.
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Date: 4/3/2016 5:18:00 AM
Congrats for the first piece. You did it well. :)
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