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Soaring Clouds

White puffy swabs Soft silky satin pillows Balmy billowy dreams

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2011 9:16:00 PM

I like all the alliteration in this one!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/13/2011 7:41:00 AM

To dream on a cloud above the cares of the world..Great descriptive work..To be saturated in the moment..Your visit to my work lifted my spirits this morn..On YouTube there is Aurora Borealis set to classical music..Just type it in..Sara

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/13/2011 3:25:00 AM

beautiful images Stephen. Soft, puffy, billowy, love the feel I get from this haiku.

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 1/12/2011 8:42:00 PM

Stephen - crisp yet flowing thoughts. Thnxs for having alook at my verse "Sex meditating" and liking it....... Best wishes/luv- Hitendra Mehta

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2011 5:29:00 PM

Nice expression on Balmy billowy dreams- with nice metaphor, Stephen

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/12/2011 10:48:00 AM

Great write Stephen got a real dreamy feel to it, felt like floating ;-)