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So Too Shall I Remain

In those moments where time slows Where life pauses, and breaths are more than simple motions When the last light of day, gives way to the curtain of night How in the darkest of hours, stars seem to shine like a million jewels against the void What can be said of yesterday? Found whole and wanting for none Until the last beat is drummed, and all is put behind As mountains stand unmoved, and reeds sway along the softened shores So too shall I remain....TAH

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Date: 7/22/2018 6:14:00 PM
Your title caught my eye and your words satisfied my curiosity. Beautiful Tobey :)
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Date: 7/21/2018 2:29:00 PM
Very artful writing.
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Date: 7/21/2018 11:38:00 AM
The story like quality brings a friendly feeling to the reader and we can almost see the stars dance in the ebony distance. Your words poetically sum up the feelings that wander through most minds at times of ponder and wonder. Emile.
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Date: 7/20/2018 5:23:00 PM
Being lost in simple moments, breaths lingering in slow motion. Magical indeed. To remain, never to leave would be breathtaking. Oh, to pause and then stay. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/20/2018 4:33:00 PM
How I love to get lost in those jewelled stars..so darkness will not scare me..Nor the vacant spaces in yesterday.How awesome your writes are..How lucky to read you again Tah.
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