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So Then She Flew

Little Ila of warm Indian waters was born without fins but with feathers. “Fishes don’t fly,” they constantly told her wings in water are just a bother. Tightly she wound them close to her and tried her best to keep up with peers Oh, she once even tried to pluck out her feathers so she wouldn't look like a fish out of water. But as she grew, her wings became larger and surely you realise, swimming became tougher. Was she the only freak of nature, she spent her time in depressed wonder Then she met the turtle who seemed wiser and gave her a dream of a sky up higher There’d be hills and vales and trees and flowers and an eternally bright cloudless summer. The journey was arduous but nothing could deter little Ila to defiantly labour up to the border Then the sun shined in her eyes, struggle just a blur, with a leap of faith soon she flew… out of water.

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Date: 4/5/2015 11:05:00 AM
This is nice. Send this to Children books publishers - it seems "Out of Water" here! Lol. Very nice. Congrats.
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Afroze Ali
Date: 4/5/2015 11:29:00 PM
Thank you Abdul:)
Date: 4/5/2015 5:04:00 AM
leap of faith helps one and all. Congrats Afroze. Mohan
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Afroze Ali
Date: 4/6/2015 12:05:00 AM
Thanks Mohan :)
Date: 4/4/2015 2:36:00 PM
Enjoyable little tale Afroze! You placed well. Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273 Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_642576
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Afroze Ali
Date: 4/6/2015 12:06:00 AM
Thank you Sheri, I am glad you enjoyed it:)
Date: 3/1/2015 10:16:00 PM
Your poem inspires us to take risks in life and not just settle for what we're given at birth... This creative story was well told, Afroze. Great work!
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Date: 3/4/2015 6:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for your appreciation Kelly.

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