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So Soft Serene and silent the head caresses pillow Landing soft and slowly with a sigh Quiet sounds of silken quilt In covered warmth Receives the fragile woman worn of age Contentment on her face As she finds comfort and companion with relief In design and form beneath As she slips between the sheets A slower moving body In the cozy bedroom for some tranquil sleep Outside, snowflakes count down the hours Blanketing the relaxed house near heaven In penetrating peace Mounting are the flowing mounds of white Building moments upon other open moments Smiles take the woman on a cloud To drift as well Composed and calm Upon her pillow down 8/21/14 Seasonal Bliss poetry contest

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Date: 8/24/2014 2:47:00 PM
Very nicely done; deserving of higher placement in my humble opinion.
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 8/24/2014 4:37:00 PM
Hi Faye, Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Congratulations to you too. Your Haiku was a great entry. Keep up the good work. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 8/23/2014 4:19:00 PM
Loving thoughts for a winter's bed. Congratulations. I would rate it much higher. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/23/2014 5:53:00 PM
Hi Joyce. Thank you so much for your kind words. Congratulations to you too for your win in the contest. You did a great job. Take it easy and take care. Earl
Date: 8/23/2014 6:36:00 AM
- A lovely poem Earl, congratulations on your winning in the contest "Seasonal Bliss" Sponsored by: Regina Riddle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/23/2014 11:29:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise, Thank you so much. Congratulations to you too on your win. I wish you well. Keep up the great work. Take care. Earl
Date: 8/23/2014 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win, Earl
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 8/23/2014 11:43:00 AM
Good afternoon Dr. Mehta, Thank you. Congratulations to you too for your well thought out and well deserved win. Earl

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