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So She Broke your Heart

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So She Broke your Heart

So she broke your heart and bled you
left you to drown in the dark waters
of melancholia that has kept you entombed 
so long within its frozen grasp 

So she broke your heart and bled you
left you lost in the forest of disenchantment…
stripped your soul like the northern winds
that strip bare the sturdy oaks

So she broke your heart and bled you
tossed you to the Ninth level of Hades
where your heart has lain in fragments
where your hopes appear like fallen ashes

So she broke your heart and bled you
never look back to what has been
we’re both needing resurrection
let love stake its claim 

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  1. Date: 4/19/2015 5:40:00 AM
    just dropping by to say Hi and reading this again, dear Audrey. Hope you are both having a wonderful weekend. Love always xxx

  1. Date: 10/26/2014 10:54:00 AM
    re-reading and enjoying this one, my dear friend. Hope and pray you are both well. Love always xxx

  1. Date: 5/20/2014 5:05:00 PM
    I am back again to reread this one. Straight into my fav it goes! Sure describes the heartbreak I endured 14 years ago!!

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 8:58:00 AM
    Sorry I can not spend the entire day reading all your works. Perhaps tonight I can read more. I saw beautiful spirit and generous talent in reading that. Bravo!

  1. Date: 4/27/2014 11:27:00 PM
    This one struck me . It has pure heart and a clear insight into lost love. Fine...

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 4:00:00 PM
    reading this heartfelt write again, my dear Annalise. I was feeling kind of sad and wrote a sonnet for Sue today. Hope you're feeling much better - I am in general. Love always to you both xx I look forward to writing with you, my friend - any subject is fine with me if my suggestion didn't inspire you

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 9:36:00 AM
    Wow,your words really capture that feeling, that horrible horrible feeling of rejection, with a glimmer of hope in the end. Super poem

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 2:40:00 AM
    a very great one, Annelise :) how have u been?

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 6:06:00 PM
    They say there's nothing fair in love or war. I think we`'ve all lost a time or two. I enjoyed seeing it from a woman's view. Nice job

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 8:42:00 PM
    Fantastic poetry dear lady.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Annalise, This is an amazing poem. Absolutely exquisite. Hope you are well.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 2:01:00 PM
    love this beautiful heartfelt write, my friend x

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:17:00 AM
    Oh Annalise, so glad to read your poetry again,, this is wonderful...

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:11:00 AM
    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Well penned my dear,love your grand style. Haven't seen you comment on people's works,are u still with us? Am really concerned,will be delighted if you kindly rePly by commenting on one of my poems. Wishing you the best. Love and hugs, Always Baron Of Ebullion.

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 9:07:00 AM
    I hope that love wins over all.......overcoming all broken hearts...whoever and whatever has will triumph :)