Get Your Premium Membership

So Rare a Soul

So rare a soul, I found in you. Grandpa, Dad. To me you were both. Salt of the earth, by those who knew, you stood by your friends and your oaths. My North Star, guiding my morals, of fears, you were there to console. Taught me life is color neutral. Encouraged me to reach my goals. Your heart, as big as all outdoors, helping anybody in need. Gave me the nudge, to learn to soar. Your examples, planted the seeds. Your one in a million, to me. This world is less now, with you gone. Of your counsel, I do still heed, "Don't do it, if you think it's wrong." For the contest: One In A Million For: Linda Marie Placement: 5th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/15/2010 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula in Linda-Marie's contest "One in a Million". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/14/2010 8:12:00 AM
Your father and grandfather sound like wonderful role models, Paula. How wise you are to follow their advice. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 11/11/2010 10:45:00 AM
Congrats, Paula. Outstanding entry. Nice going. xxxRalph
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2010 8:56:00 PM
A beautiful dedication to your granpa. Many congratulations on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2010 7:07:00 AM
Hi Paula. Congratulations on your placing with this wonderful piece. Thought provoking love filled words. Eamon
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2010 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win,Paula
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2010 12:25:00 AM
An assertion of a strong bonding between you and your grandfather, our greatest legacy from our elders are their words of wisdom. Congratulations, Paula on winning 5th place on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2010 7:14:00 PM
Great tribute , Paula. Your dad/grandpa would be proud. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2010 5:02:00 PM
Beautiful one in a million poem, Paula. Congratulations on a poem well worthy of it's honor. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2010 4:38:00 PM
Dear Paula, Congratulations on your fantastic win in Linda's Contest with this beautiful tribute to your Dad and Gandfather! Love, Audrey
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2010 3:44:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your success in my One in a Million contest with this exceptional write.. very touching and sweet ..sensitive write.. enjoy.. and thankxxx for supporting always...
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2010 6:23:00 AM
Very live pen picture you have drawn of your grandpa, Paula. Good luck
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2010 1:57:00 AM
you have powerfully presented the influence and love of your 'grandpa,papa' on you.nice poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2010 7:42:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your one in a million.... those are precious rarities.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2010 7:00:00 PM
Great poem for the contest, Paula. I'm sorry for your loss. Read my "When You Think of Me." It's addresses dealing with death.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things