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He so longed to touch Her peachy tanned tush When he spied her there on the beach Lusting from afar At her bikini top bra Each boob looked like a ripe peach Her juicy pert curves Would be his hors d’oeuvres If his hand her tush he could reach With his wife by his side His desires were denied If she knew, then she’d start to screech! 14th August 2016

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William Smith

Date: 8/17/2016 8:03:00 PM

This is great. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2016 11:29:00 AM

Thanks William:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/15/2016 6:39:00 PM

Hilarious! True, but funny still!!! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2016 6:43:00 PM

Yes it is very much real lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 8/15/2016 6:07:00 PM

lol Jan its great.......Seren

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2016 6:27:00 PM

Thanks Seren I had fun here:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 8/15/2016 9:23:00 AM

This is a prime example of Jan being Jan. Some things never change, and I'm glad you never do.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2016 12:13:00 PM

Thanks Lin:-) I had fun with this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/15/2016 8:34:00 AM

Hi Jan, like it, i came looking for my fun and as always you came through. Looking at it slightly serious, you see this so often. As a guy i say it does anger me. There must be something wrong with me, i never have done this when i have been at the beach with a lady. I Loved the read. It would have been good for him to get a sock in the eyes for his trouble, then again, playing for fun, that would spoil the whole ambience, what? This is a seven Jan. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2016 12:14:00 PM

Thanks Mike - I wrote the poem then found the perfect pic - guess there is no harm in looking... good job his wife wasn't! Hugs Jan xx

Old Man Emu

Date: 8/15/2016 5:12:00 AM

Ha Ha, Great job Jan, great to read a poem to make you smile, such light hearted humor. Thanks Craig

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2016 5:41:00 AM

Thanks Craig :-) the poem only took a few minutes to write and when I found the picture I thought it was perfect:-) hugs Jan xx

Phillip Garcia

Date: 8/15/2016 2:32:00 AM

Ha!! That's past fabulous. Imagery has been conquered by you on this. Good stuff ++

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2016 2:35:00 AM

ha ha ha - told you I was working on my imagery lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/14/2016 7:03:00 PM

jan, you've outdone yourself with this one! just perfect and so much fun!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2016 7:05:00 PM

Thanks Ilene I'm glad it made you smile, it only took about 4 minutes to write lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/14/2016 6:11:00 PM

Wonderful Jan...The picture is soooo perfect for your very succinct and sassy rhyme with a great title too! Everything about this made me smile...I will definitely revisit as I imagine the "comments" will be just as lively :-) blessings, lynn

Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2016 6:14:00 PM

Thanks Lynn:-) I wrote the poem then found the picture which fitted so perfectly lol:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 8/14/2016 5:58:00 PM

Men look, dogs sniff fire hydrants, we're animals....

Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2016 5:59:00 PM

That comment made me smile John:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mike Martin

Date: 8/14/2016 5:41:00 PM

Jan, you really captured a moment there. In defense of men every where ... how could any real man NOT feel that way? Well done, Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2016 5:43:00 PM

LOL Great comment there Mike:-) hugs Jan xx