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So 'Opeless

time went out the window... my resolve followed

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/30/2010 9:26:00 AM

Short but true. If you say so much with such few words, you'll never be a politician. God Bless. Vince

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/18/2010 5:06:00 AM

ompletely opeless,hehe!i love your style sweet girl!

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/17/2010 10:15:00 AM

Nikko this says so much hey. Trust me, I'm reading between the lines ;) crazy for sure lol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/17/2010 10:06:00 AM

hi! there Nikko, how are you today,,lol,, still laughing about yesterday. stopping by to say HI!..got to go read your blog,,later,..p.d.

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 10/17/2010 12:03:00 AM

this actually speaks volume amidst its briefness...^_^ v

De R

Date: 10/16/2010 8:11:00 AM

This is so true for the most of us, great couplet:) Hugs, Emilia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2010 7:23:00 AM

soupmail!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/14/2010 7:43:00 PM

wow! out the wind..oi! mine clock stayed stuck long ago,, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2010 9:42:00 PM

This little couplet is superb, dear Nikko!!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/12/2010 2:11:00 PM

no time to hope....good thought

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/12/2010 10:43:00 AM

cute one NIkko

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/12/2010 10:16:00 AM

Soup mail in a moment

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/12/2010 10:07:00 AM

This is exactly the way life feels. Time flies and takes away our hopes, Nikko. Sad, but very poignant write. Thanks for your comments on my epitaph. My sister won many beauty contests and was her high school and college valedictorian. Few could compete with that. Love, Carolyn