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So Many Fallen Drops

so many fallen drops then one sea

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Monika Martyn

Date: 7/21/2016 12:00:00 PM

Now that is poetic! Love it.

Roberthenry Poulin

Date: 8/21/2013 5:03:00 PM

it tkes a drop to make an ocean, once the drop falls into the sea it merges and becomes lost into one bigger water. Once it melds and merges into the ocean water there is no way to ever get that drop back again, like frying an egg, once scrambled it never can be back to egg again. In life we all merge into one with each other. One human is all humans. One flower is all flowers, one love is blissfully mated to another soul. Bob Mesage for SKAT

Skat A

Date: 8/21/2013 2:06:00 PM

Like I said, Robert you are a haiku artist. I haven't mastered them at all... :-) SKAT

Roberthenry Poulin
Date: 8/21/2013 5:26:00 PM

You got feelings, you will be a great haiku/senryu/tanka poet. Emulate emulate and don't take them seriously. I don't even write my poems, they come so fast from I know not where somewhere inside my mind they come out fully formed and I never edit, they are just as they arrive to my awareness. Bob

Roberthenry Poulin
Date: 8/21/2013 5:24:00 PM

My son has a small publishing company, I am an officer and Vice President of COLT PRESS. I am having an operation tomorrow on my colon, he is coming down with the cover and the text. The little volume of my works, some of my poems. THE LAST LEAF DECIDES is the title. Find a book, Bruce Ross has one: HOW TO HAIKU. I AM FEATURED IT IT. READ HAIKU, WRITE THEM, YOU WILL BE GREAT AT IT.

Roberthenry Poulin
Date: 8/21/2013 5:20:00 PM

Here is a hint. Emulate me. Look at a haiku or Senryu or tanka you like of mine and emulate it. Say to yourself, I can write one almost like that. Then try just saying it near what and how I said it. It is not stealing, many ancient haiku poets of Japan used each other's lines. I don't mind. A famous haiku poet told me once: write them, send them, and let them go. Take one of my poems, make it like into one of yours. Bob. too, say something in line one, then think to say something that compliments line one in line two or tree. Make it in two distinct parts.

Roberthenry Poulin
Date: 8/21/2013 5:04:00 PM

I have no idea yet LOL how to send a message, I sent you a message on POST COMMENT. I HOPE YOU GOT IT.