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So It Begins

so it begins i can see the light not that one you nitwit but the world looking bright what is causing this breakview i hear you say tbe expertise of a surgeon has saved tbe day had a cataract which made seeing gross now life is bright again no more remorse the only trouble is i can see dust what a shame lived once in ignorant bliss now can write my name so it begins.... seeing my demise now i look through bright shiny eyes. penned 8 February 2019

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Date: 10/21/2019 2:34:00 AM
Well I could also see a light. I hope you get some contact from me. I have things to share with you.
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Date: 2/26/2019 8:57:00 PM
I need to have cataract surgery like you did, Seeing Dust Totally mind blowing! Fun poem Panagiota USA
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/26/2019 9:04:00 PM
had both eyes done now it was worth tbe expense. good luck. and thank you...Seren
Date: 2/9/2019 6:05:00 AM
love the humour about the dust Seren - its amazing what surgery can do these days!:-) hugs Jan xx
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