So Fine

They call it three-quarter time so put your hand in mine and we can boogie woogie all night long. This syncopated rhythm is very unforgiving we'll be working up a sweat all night long. As the harmony begins our feet mirror like twins doing the boogie woogie all night long. Feel the muscles scream as I swing and you lean oh, we are so fine all night long.

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Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2009 8:01:00 AM

I am dancing in my head...but given the chance...I dance in the living room with my grandkids like a crazy woman!! This makes me want to turn up the music!! ~ :)

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/28/2009 6:11:00 AM

Sounds awesome. Dancing is something I don't do too often and miss way too much! Such a fun write! Love, Shar

Arany P.

Date: 3/28/2009 1:03:00 AM

this write is so much fun ... the boogie woogie... is so cute!! ~ Arany

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/27/2009 10:14:00 PM

You make it sound like so much fun! I loved dancing but due to some knee injuries it is not really a possibility for me any longer. Thank you for allowing me to dance in on this one. In my mind through your words I was able to "boogie woogie" as I read along. great imagery and great writing. Smiles from Lolita

Belinda Parish

Date: 3/27/2009 7:10:00 PM

I enjoyed this write Sue. Got some foot work going on ...lol.

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/27/2009 6:26:00 PM

This is a fun one, love the rhyme and the tune...I had to sing this Boogie Woogie All Night Long... I bet y'all were some "dancin kats"...Nicely done.GB Always Tyesha