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So Far So Good

It's one o'clock in the morning he usually goes to bed while I'm up mourning the absence of company instead maybe he's finally realizing that it's overrated and to ensure our hours are equalizing sleeping is generated games not played though seemingly time spent in conjunction I'm not Eve manipulating she merely wants not to malfunction this is glorious we're not concerned with tomorrow sugar with snips are notorious the cliché I'll somewhat borrow he's still awake I can't believe it I'm waiting for the earth to quake bliss flickers for not to split

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Date: 2/19/2021 8:36:00 AM
Now, both couples and singles are having different kinds of problems then they did years ago. A new life for all. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/20/2021 1:09:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. You're right. It is much different than what I remember my parents going through. Hope you have a great weekend :)
Date: 2/18/2021 1:02:00 PM
I liked this one. Perhaps because I like differences in a relationship that should be honored. Love..."We're not concerned about tomorrow"...how awesome. Panagiota
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/20/2021 1:10:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota. We are different in a lot of our ways of doing things. Hope you have a great weekend :)
Date: 2/17/2021 10:43:00 PM
From a reader's point of view, the poetry so sad, yet realistic, Love this, says so much.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/20/2021 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, Harry. It was really nice of him to stay up with me. Hope you have a great weekend :)
Date: 2/16/2021 5:42:00 AM
This poem is heartfelt - all I wish for you both is strength and love - today couples are responsible for so much, each one involved in what has to be done - this is how things are today, in the life we all live. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/20/2021 1:02:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. I really appreciate you reading my poetry. Hope you have a great weekend :)
Date: 2/16/2021 5:05:00 AM
Nice to be not concerned about tomorrow once in a while. He is still awake--perhaps the same things on his mind. You speak for many couples in this poem, Angela.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/20/2021 12:35:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. It was nice for him to stay awake with me, for a change. Hope you have a great weekend :)
Date: 2/15/2021 10:49:00 PM
Not an ideal situation. Seems when he goes to sleep you have other things to do. Never had such an experience. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/20/2021 12:33:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. We do need to synchronize our time. Hope you have a great weekend :)
Date: 2/15/2021 9:41:00 PM
Hello my friend, I hope things will get better. Stay strong and God bless. A heartfelt poem, made me think of my long past memory... Hugs!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/20/2021 12:31:00 PM
Thank you, Akkina. I always appreciate you visiting my page. Have a great weekend :)
Date: 2/15/2021 8:02:00 PM
This is a bitter-truth in some couples now a days...and with the increasing demands of time...they become very near and yet so far..Well-written, Angela. Blessings..
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/20/2021 12:29:00 PM
Thank you, JCB. I really appreciate you reading and commenting. Have a great weekend :)

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