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So Cut Up (Dead At the Seems)

shut it up, i dont want to die here close the door, im too araid of you go away, im so afraid to cry here give up hope, there nothing you can do. so cut up, im dead as we know it. so cut up, im dead at the seams. i believe im gone for the moment i believe, ive ruined your dreams. shut it up, just speak in a whisper close the door, im done with the lies go away, i can't take the disaster give up hope, its your only disguse so cut up, believe what you want to so cut up, beieve what you see i believe, ive ruined your future i believe, ive ruined your dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/7/2016 8:29:00 AM
C D ,,,, THIS IS GOOD POEM...SKAT
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Date: 5/2/2016 10:56:00 AM
catia davis, well done...LINDA
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Date: 5/12/2010 12:45:00 PM
Cat, are these your poems?
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Date: 7/31/2009 8:19:00 AM
excellent exposure of extreme pain and anger..the meter was great..the lack of gramatic punctuation seemed ;) to FIT the content! Loved the title TOO! Please help me out by entering a verse on "War what is it good for" contest! Light & Love
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