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So Close

It was a cold but clear day and for some reason, we didn’t come to play. Maybe we wanted football to end, Maybe we just weren’t good enough- No. If we weren’t good enough, Defeat wouldn’t be so painful, But as the game went on Our hopes began to fade, Our season was coming to an end. We fought hard, We played with heart, But since we made mistakes, It just wasn’t enough. However it was enough For one last play, One play left from our own 20 yard line. The field stood still As the ball flew in the air like a jet, But as it fell to the turf, The pain began to kick in. The pain of working all year, In hot August, And freezing November, Only to lose by two points. We came so close, But there is nothing worse Than to come this close, Because close DOESN’T COUNT In football

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/19/2016 2:29:00 PM
Sebastian Dzidkiewicz, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/17/2011 4:13:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sebastian. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 8:54:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. hope u have fun on PS as u share with luv... our contests are all free so check them out and good luck luv..
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