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So Broke It Hurts

So Broke It Hurts! O' debt where is thy wicked and terrible sting sold already are my watch and gold ring Creditors waiting so patiently at my front door hopes of making a truly great score! Fridge quite empty and cupboard so damn bare wife stole it all, even my old grey mare Banker called, warned me I am five grand overdue a dozen more crying they going to sue! Woke early this morn with a wallet quite flat this far down sure isn't where it's at Car taken away last week due to failure to pay power turned off this cold, miserable day No bright side to all this poor, sad calamity even lost my pride and all my humanity Now so poor , can not even pay attention so broke even my dog is held in detention! Robert L. 05-23-2014 I wrote this back in my early twenties. A rewrite from memory since it was one of my poems in the three journals my first ex-wife burned for spite! Five long years I worked average 80 and 90 hour weeks to regain that which I lost in that sad divorce.. Learned what don't kill ya makes ya stronger!! Can laugh about it now but back then it was pure misery! If you've never been there thank your lucky stars or blessings!

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Date: 7/10/2014 10:37:00 PM
Robert A poem lots of people can relate to now a days. Too many struggling to make ends meet from week to week. Hope it is better for you now. thank you for the wonderful comment on my A Heart Can Fly poem.
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Date: 5/25/2014 4:21:00 AM
a lovely poem, so well expressed, and it is sad when people leave us broke, both financially and physically i was lucky as i found a way out after my last divorce i made agreement to pay bills every moth so is all going fine, thank God for that, stand strong stand tall and just keep moving on. chin up shoulders back for God looks after us no matter where we are at.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/25/2014 10:23:00 AM
Thanks for commenting and your kind words. Very happy to read you too overcame such adversity. True, God rewards our spirit , kindness and generosity. I hope you have ever more blessings tossed upon your path as daily gifts from God...
Date: 5/24/2014 7:09:00 AM
Good work Robert...Enjoyed the rhyme although the content is painful. Ive never been in that terrible place, although for years lived "paycheck to paycheck",,,BG
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/24/2014 9:37:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Isn't it amazing how such past hard times and pain can be looked back on and laughed at? Which is the case because one learns its thru trials and errors that we advance and build our character.

Book: Shattered Sighs