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So Brief

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So Brief

A brief moment 
You were
That sliver of hope
Surprising my heart
No matter my plan
His was for You
And although brief
A promise became 
My heartstring to God
That now tugs hard
At the thought
You are gone
I'll feel the tug again
in the smiles of my loves
And warmth of his embrace
You softened my soul
Pulled back the thorns
Protecting my vulnerability
Prepared me to Love
With Everything 

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  1. Date: 5/22/2012 2:17:00 AM
    Very good poem. The last 4 lines are powerful.i

    Journey Avatar Blythe Journey
    Date: 8/18/2012 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you from my heart! ....a miscarriage is a very hard thing to deal with!