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My furry friend is a little five pound grey cat, And within her soul there is so much happiness; She runs like a streak this way and that way, And then of course, must have a quiet moment. But, oh my, she can play for hours and hours, She leaps and runs and spins in swirling circles; There is a particular white play mouse she adores, Carries it in her mouth, I even find it in my bed. Oh, how she loves her scratching post in the sun, Sometimes she is hanging up side down, meow; And did I mention the balls she bats all around, Then she flings herself on the sofa beside me. And with a contented sigh she snuggles close, We can stay like that for hours and hours; And then, she starts the play all over again, When it is time for bed, she curls up in a ball. puuuuurrrrrrr ..... _____________________________ February 23, 2016 Poetry/Verse/"Snuggles" Copyright Protected, ID 16-760-941-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the Furry Friends Contest, sponsor, Royal T Fourth Place

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Date: 5/7/2016 5:37:00 AM
Delightfully lovely and cute, Constance! Cats are such loving animals and they can be great companions. ~ Congrats on this fine win! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/6/2016 8:43:00 PM
awwww Broken Wings! congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 2/26/2016 9:06:00 PM
This is so cute, Constance. It's exactly what the judge wanted! glad I finally saw it!!
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Date: 2/27/2016 8:09:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the cute, hope and pray it is what the judge wanted, I know I love it !!
Date: 2/25/2016 4:36:00 AM
ok you win ..." its sweet"
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Date: 2/25/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 2/24/2016 7:49:00 PM
You mean this is your cat? Wow so cute!
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Date: 2/24/2016 7:53:00 PM
Well, not exactly that cat is my cat, but my cat looks just like that cat... did that make any sense, lol,
Date: 2/24/2016 7:45:00 PM
I forgot to add, that Photo is just so adorable!!!!!!!
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Date: 2/24/2016 7:48:00 PM
Arthur, of course Snuggles is much bigger now, but still the sweetest little cat, and so playful, it never stops until she crashes...
Date: 2/24/2016 7:22:00 PM
I see even infantile little men commenting, so let me tell you, as you can see by the majority of comments, this is a really sweet beautiful poem, that part is obvious, however its also a well constructed poem, the words slip of the tongue it flows to well, and this is poetry that has mass appeal, and we write to be read no? So a great success, ignore the little men.
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Date: 2/24/2016 7:42:00 PM
Arthur, oh thanks so much for the wonderful comment and the compliments, so appreciated, yes, most people commenting liked my sweet poem, only one found fault in it... and who cares, I really like my poem for the contest...
Date: 2/24/2016 10:38:00 AM
Playful write BW.
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Date: 2/24/2016 11:24:00 AM
James, thanks for visiting, appreciate ~
Date: 2/24/2016 4:20:00 AM
a little bit infantile, perhaps suit the younger reader,
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:59:00 AM
Ian, the contest is called Furry Friend, what did you want me to write about, a rat... and infantile is okay, I still have a lot of child within me . . . and I am quite proud that I can see the world with the eyes of child at times... thanks for visiting
Date: 2/23/2016 3:58:00 PM
Your friend sounds delightful, Constance :)...wait till she brings you home your first bird!!peace, jill
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Date: 2/23/2016 6:06:00 PM
Jill, thanks for visiting, oh isn't it horrid how these cute little fur balls turn into predators !
Date: 2/23/2016 3:18:00 PM
awwww so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee good lcuk with the contest this is a charming poem Constance:-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 2/23/2016 6:07:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting, with the cute and charming and hugs, and 7, one can never go wrong with a kitty poem ~

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