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snowy realization of time

As time pours over me
Laughing stars meet my stare
My morning existence
Worthless in your absence

When eyes open sunken
A bruised halo 
Circles their movements
Every direction searched thoroughly
You are not there
I am not here

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  1. Date: 11/10/2010 11:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Julian. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:27:00 PM
    Julian, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 11:40:00 AM
    Julian, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 10:19:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem featured on PS this week, Julian. Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 11:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Julian. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 6:39:00 PM
    The second line really got my attention. To think of the stars as laughing at your stare in the absence of love was very powerful. The last two lines were very strong. Excellent poem.