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Snowflakes

I traveled down, down, down I hit the ground! I waited. Waiting for someone to find me. No one did. I sat and sat. up, up, I traveled up, dancing with the wind until there was nothing left of me but an ocean of cold. Down, down, down, under the sea so blue deeper, deeper, I go.

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Date: 3/18/2017 10:01:00 PM
Hi Sequoia, well crafted, well written write. Anything to do with snow draws me in. I am glad i looked in on this little gem. The words sing to me. Excellent. This has to be a seven....Mike.
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Sequoia Dawn
Date: 3/19/2017 9:06:00 PM
thankyou so much! I am glad i wrote this poem!that is so nce of you! im 10 yrs old but i wrote this when i was 9. -sequoia dawn go to my website: jaguarspotsmagazin.wixsite.com/liftup ps. please tell people about me i would really aprecciate it!
Date: 1/10/2017 9:04:00 AM
Nicely written and crafted.
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Date: 3/18/2017 2:59:00 PM
Thankyou go to my website : jaguarspotsmagazin.wixsite.com/liftup

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