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At a distance, snow
clumped beneath a pine tree 
plastic Walmart bag


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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 10:15:00 AM
    A haiku to make you think about the effects, mankind has done to the earth. Nicely penned and I hope you did well in the contest!

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 9:48:00 PM
    very good one, an environmentally satire work, Susan. :) CONGRATSS

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 9:18:00 PM
    Many congrats on this fine win dear Susan

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:10:00 PM
    Congrats, Susan. Excellent write. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 12:43:00 PM
    A very powerful Haiku. Walmarts bags are certainly found on the grounds. Congrats. Connie

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 10:16:00 AM
    LOL--enjoyed this one Susan

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 12:43:00 AM
    nice haiku friend Susan. Congratulations on your win :) Cheers!!

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:05:00 PM
    Susan,, an excellent poem, for my contest CONGRATULATIONS :-) Goodnight~ PD

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 10:55:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Hola, Susan how are you?? Are you packing your bags yet?? Ready for a Texas adventure... LOL...JK... anyways, I'm stopping by to say hi AGAIN. and read your latest. and about your haiku..I thought the image only happens in Texas. all the trees and flowers wear white plastic bags to cover their beauty.. Sadly they die from the suffocation and dumb weather down here. I love this one.. i can go on and on about this. I can even send you pictures of the image above :-( luv~ PD

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 5:41:00 PM
    Great insight of the modern world..Enjoyed reading your Haiku..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 1:22:00 PM
    this is awesome, Susan. So nice to see a new post up here from you!! soupmail in a second

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 11:48:00 AM
    Ha...this is cool

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 4:27:00 PM
    This is a fabulous write my friend! I really loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!