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Snowbirds

warm sun beckons nubile bodies lie on white sand shores snowbirds

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2011 12:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Diane in Charles's contest "Haiku Your Way". Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/31/2011 5:13:00 PM

Congratulations to you Diane on this great poem. I see from the comments that you got a big win on it. I can certainly see why. nice hearing from you thanks for your encouraging comment

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/30/2011 12:47:00 PM

Hi Diane - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the haiku contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

Date: 1/29/2011 5:22:00 PM

Congratulations Diane on your 3rd place win in the contest with this wonderful Haiku----kashinath

John Freeman

Date: 1/29/2011 4:50:00 PM

Congratulations Diane, on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2011 4:06:00 PM

Good one..Got a laugh..Congratulations..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2011 3:41:00 PM

I remember this gem! a big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2011 3:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Diane! Love, Carolyn

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/29/2011 1:17:00 PM

Great image here. congratulations on 3rd place. Well done, Déirdre

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/29/2011 11:56:00 AM

Congrats Diane on your winning poem in the Haiku your way contest with this awesome piece ..enjoy with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/29/2011 11:20:00 AM

This is a very descriptive haiku, Diane :) enjoyed reading this :) Congrats on your win :) -- nikko :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/29/2011 8:13:00 AM

I love the unique visual of this one....just lovely, Diane! Congratulations!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/28/2011 2:13:00 PM

Nice work, Diane. That's how it looks in Florida. Great description of those who flock to the South when winter sets in. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2011 9:37:00 AM

Beautiful Diane. Enjoyed reading it today. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 9:00:00 PM

very interesting, the contrast of sun and white snowbirds!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/27/2011 6:45:00 PM

very cute write on the snowbirds with pleasing picture, Diane

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2011 5:02:00 PM

Scenic picture in words painted so beautifully Diane .. good luck in the contest .. with luv..