Snow Season

The garden’s like a canvas, white as any page, And snowflake ballerinas flutter cross a stage. Jack Horne, written 7th October and, lol, posted too late for Gail’s A Season’s Dance contest: Winter

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Robin Davis

Date: 4/21/2014 4:50:00 PM

Jack What a sweet scene you have created. The visual description pulls the reader in. Thanks for the kind comment on my One Chance poem

Kathryn Collins

Date: 10/20/2013 9:57:00 AM

Jack -- I can't get that snowy day out of my mind. Will be here soon and I know good flaky dancers when I see them.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/19/2013 10:37:00 AM

oh ever so visual Jack..brilliant poetry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2013 3:57:00 PM

this is what I call short but sweet!!

Terry O'Leary

Date: 10/12/2013 8:35:00 AM

Short and sweet... loved it, Jack!... Terry

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/11/2013 10:24:00 PM

I wonder what you would have written for autumn's season because the winter's dance is so very pretty, you are such a talented individual! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What an outstanding piece! Great Work!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/11/2013 6:19:00 PM

love the image this gives...nicely penned!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/11/2013 2:56:00 PM

It would have been in the winners' list I am sure..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for all the visits ..Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/11/2013 2:42:00 PM

hi Jack very good couplet much enjoyed reading it Shadow x smile