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'snow Lined'

~An Haiku from my window~ an example for my contest~ snow lined power lines glistening blanketed roof fire escape iced

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Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/7/2011 5:46:00 PM

Ice belongs on an ice-hockey rink not a fire escape 'cause firemen don't pack boots with metal blades in their gear...lol...Have another creative day filled with blessings Michael and thanks for commenting. CR

Constance La France

Date: 2/6/2011 4:00:00 PM

very visual, I was like there~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2011 2:46:00 PM

You sound as if you are in winter wonderland at the moment, while I am in Drearville!! Good example for us. LUv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/6/2011 1:24:00 PM

Beautifully captured one, Michael. Come summer I'll miss all this pristine beauty! Always, Annalise

Elaine George

Date: 2/6/2011 12:16:00 PM

Vivid picture you paint in this well written Haiku, Michael. I have made the necessary changes to mine as you requested. Thank you for sponsoring the contest and for the inspiration. Elaine

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2011 11:45:00 AM

Your wish is my command luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2011 11:09:00 AM

thankxxx my W.K.and the entry for your contest has been submitted luv... hope u enjoy and much success with this beautiful theme.. Jersey Girl in football gear ..haha.. black and gold seems to suit me since it cannot be blue..luv... enjoy the game..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/6/2011 9:15:00 AM

A very vivid image of the scene outside your window, Michael. I'm thinking you live in a city apartment and are snowbound at the moment. Much different here. Enjoyed this fine example and am looking out my own window in wonder as I consider writing for your contest. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2011 7:59:00 AM

That would be a treachous escape..Great descriptive Haiku..I know that the contest will bring some great works out onto soup..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2011 7:23:00 AM

Same exact picture here Michael and u graced this page with brilliant descriptive words my White Knight... and guess what.. more for Tuesday and Thursday.. oh joy.. oh fun.. oh no.. am so done with this weather...luv.. your Jersey Girl praying for hot weather luv.. hi to fair lady ... still think Jets should be in it today..