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Snow Flakes

first walk together as snowflakes scatter and land sprinkled on your cheeks try to kiss them all they are melting on my lips love covered in white **SN*O*W** *HAIKU** contest by SKat.

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Skat A

Date: 1/17/2011 1:45:00 PM

no I don't know who that "dangerous ride" was with.. but the twist makes me wish. well .. lol.. comment to myself.. by the way.. another super wow! on your catching them snowflakes with the magic of the moment.. sweet~skat

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/5/2010 10:57:00 AM

beautiful and sweet, congrats on your win in the contest

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/5/2010 6:24:00 AM

WHOOT!! congrats and thanks for your greetins too, michael! .. nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2010 9:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest...Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/2/2010 10:04:00 AM

Michael, congratulations on your great win in Irma's contest ;-) love Wilma

John Freeman

Date: 12/2/2010 8:47:00 AM

Congratulations Michael on your worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 8:44:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win of Skat's contest, Michael

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 8:02:00 AM

Still enjoy this, congrats on your win, love covered in white is fun!

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2010 7:54:00 AM

nice ones........each one is a bit of romance in three little lines! :) Congratulations!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 7:38:00 AM

Good morning, Micahel) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 4:04:00 AM

Big congratulations on your win Michael in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/2/2010 1:03:00 AM

great stuff, michael.. congrats on the win!!

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/1/2010 9:26:00 PM

Love covered in white is such a great line, Michael. Congrats to you on your win in the contest. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2010 8:51:00 PM

Most romantic ones I've read on the list. Awesome, Michael and congratulations.

Skat A

Date: 12/1/2010 8:46:00 PM

Michael, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/1/2010 8:39:00 PM

Congrats my White Knight of P.S. on your big win in the Snow contest with this super write luv.. enjoy tonight my friend.. your Jersey Girl forever.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/30/2010 8:02:00 PM

As for me Michale, i love the cold ice melting in my on my tongue. The sad part is i have to melt ice cubes in my mouth,,lol,, We don't get snow here in south Texas.. okay maybe once in a lifetime. But, i have seen it plenty of times,.~good luck~.p..d

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/28/2010 9:09:00 PM

Very sweet and beautiful, good luck!

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/27/2010 12:27:00 PM

Oh Michael, I feel the love in the air. This is wonderful As Always, Shar

Skat A

Date: 11/27/2010 11:33:00 AM

Hi, M.J. stopping real quick 2 say thanks 4 the comment. Also thanxs 4 this fine entry. I only peeked. Have a nice day*luv~SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/27/2010 9:13:00 AM

Romance seems to spring from the snowfall, Michael. A terrific entry for the snow contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 11/27/2010 9:04:00 AM

This is so sweet and loving and special and wonderful and well I just love it, best of luck in the contest~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/27/2010 6:05:00 AM

Oh how very romantic Michael... only my W.K. could take Snow Flakes and make them sexy luv.. and we picked the same theme to write about..how cool is that luv? thankxx for your prayers and concern.. Ron is in hospital ..will be out by Tuesday if he keeps up such good progress luv.. appreciate so much.. good luck in Irma's contest luv.. it will be a top winner for sure.. after all ..romance is always a top winner my friend.. happy weekend with luv..from your forever J.G...luv.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/27/2010 5:24:00 AM

Enjoyed this romantic work...I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Good luck in the contest with this excellent work...I was delighted that you stopped by my work..Sara