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Snow Filled

Gray clouds that look like they could be snow filled Fields of cotton that looks whiter than snow Some fields have been harvested_gleaned and cleaned Some that have had plow turn them_now wait Those fields will be replanted with what crop And exactly when is left to farmer Fields white unto harvest my friend a good crop Just writing for fun.....

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/30/2012 6:56:00 PM

nothing smells as good as a freshly plowed field! Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/21/2012 7:18:00 AM

Your fun is our pleasure. You have painted a lovely picture Sara.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2012 7:19:00 PM

charmed by this lilting gidt, sara.. sounds like a fine bounty.. so wonderfully scribed!..:) huggs!

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 11/20/2012 5:18:00 PM

Most enchanting poem with a profound message. I admire the light veil through which filters a great message. I am a great admirer of the beauty of your writings. Thanks for your thought provoking comments on my Tanka Test of Love. Your comments are filled with vision and wisdom. No doubt old age divulges the true meaning of love in all its depth and quality. It is indeed a new dawn, Sara. Have a nice day. -Mohammad

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/20/2012 3:24:00 PM

a scene i'm not familar with Sara, thanks for sharing with me...

Terry O'Leary

Date: 11/20/2012 3:17:00 PM

The weather here's been rather dreary... your 'whiteness' has brightened my day... Thanks... Terry

Jack Horne

Date: 11/20/2012 2:06:00 PM

love this, my friend - I could 'see' those white fields of cotton : )

David Williams

Date: 11/20/2012 12:27:00 PM

Sara you make the cold feel warm...David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2012 11:07:00 AM

...... When the snow gets wet ..... so cold ... .... your cotton snow sound soft and warm, Sara - Lovely written. - Have a wonderful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/20/2012 10:58:00 AM

The superior write that I have read is so great I loved every word of it my friend! You have delighted me to no end with this tremendous piece! What a fantastic poem, Awesome Work!!

Kash Poet

Date: 11/20/2012 10:21:00 AM

Beautiful verse here Sara.Lovely read.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/20/2012 8:22:00 AM

Sara; I like this. Fields of cotton that look whiter than snow. How can I forget that. When I was real young, I worked in the cotton fields. this brings back memories. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla