Snow Fall

the falling snow glistened like polished diamonds

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Heidie Buys

Date: 10/18/2008 7:16:00 AM

A vivid and very beautiful mental picture this poem evokes. Well done. Love Heidie

Brian Strand

Date: 10/16/2008 11:54:00 PM

In close up they are indeed D-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome & interesting comments

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/16/2008 11:14:00 AM

Can't wait. can't wait. Beautiful. Love, Shar

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/16/2008 11:10:00 AM

This is excellent. I like the reference to polished diamond. The imagery is striking. The symbology used is excellent. Great job! ~Joseph

Lena W

Date: 10/16/2008 5:55:00 AM

great analogy about snow. lena

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/16/2008 5:26:00 AM

Yes, it does, and that is why snow opens me up - it is in my very DNA, love snow, and this tribute, love Kristin

George Anos

Date: 10/15/2008 9:23:00 PM

Oh yes, specially when it catches the sun's rays! hehehe! I've seen snow the same way too Deneen! Thanks for reminding me hahaha! brgds. The Olongapoet

James Foulk

Date: 10/15/2008 9:19:00 PM

we have not had snow here yet, but it could come any time now. this was a great piece of work Deneen, I really enjoy reading your poety.

Michael Torres

Date: 10/15/2008 5:49:00 PM

beautiful Deneen. Great choice of words to describe. Excellent write. So cleverly written. Tankyou for your loving comments on my poems. God bless you Michael