Snow Day

pearly tears tumble from a dolphin grey sky a frozen morning modern haiku, less than 17 syllables

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2011 12:36:00 AM

Love that line Dolphin grey!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/30/2010 6:00:00 PM

Eiken..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/30/2010 2:22:00 PM

Enjoyed this one...My brain automaticly compared Dolphin Gray to a sky that would release snow..Good one...I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/30/2010 5:43:00 AM

Nice images to piant a snowy day, Eiken

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/30/2010 3:42:00 AM

Well done, vivid imagery in a few words.