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Snow Cone Magic

The red umbrella was the sign An icy treat would soon be mine A memory when I was young When snow cone magic cooled my tongue A block of ice perched on a cart A masterpiece, a work of art The line was long but soon I’d be Filled with joy and summer glee I watched the vendor scrape the ice Fixed upon the strange device Particles that sprayed about Cooled my face from summer’s drought Then he shaped the precious chips I dreamed of how they’d cool my lips Now the time to choose at last My flavor choice the man would ask Coconut would always win And so he’d start to pour and spin A bottle rich with sweet delight Oh how I loved that icy sight Done and paid now it was time True happiness for just a dime Then racing fast against the sun As coco ice would melt and run

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/27/2023 2:18:00 PM
Just seeing this for the first time and enjoyed this, as well as many of your other poems. You have rare gift of imagination, rhythm/rhyme, and ability to connect. Best to you, Samia.
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Date: 7/30/2012 4:10:00 PM
revisiting this summer delight of yours! thanks for your sweet comment to me.
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Date: 6/18/2012 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's contest Samia. Love, Carol
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/18/2012 1:38:00 PM
Hey Carol, THank you very much! :)
Date: 6/14/2012 5:49:00 PM
This one brought back summer memories of great flavor...Enjoyed reading this eve..The poem had great rhyme, rhythm, and flow..Sara
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/14/2012 6:52:00 PM
Hey Sara, I'm so glad this poem brought back good memories for you. Thank you very much! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/14/2012 5:50:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment with a kind review about my work..Sara
Date: 6/8/2012 9:46:00 PM
A sublime food memory for you. Children love this in the heat of summer. So you loved coconut, huh? THis was so nice to learn about you and your childhood.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/9/2012 5:57:00 AM
Hey Andrea, Yes, this was one of the best summertime treats - especially in the hot concrete jungle. Oh yes, and coconut is still my favorite! :) Thank you for reading this and commenting Andrea ...Samia
Date: 6/8/2012 2:20:00 PM
left my tongue dripping,lol,nice coconut flavour write Samia
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/8/2012 2:22:00 PM
LOL - Thank you so much Richard! Love that coconut! :)
Date: 6/8/2012 1:53:00 PM
Oh, I just love this! What a wonderful memory and fantastic rhyme....Tanya
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/8/2012 2:09:00 PM
Hey Tanya, Thank you so much! :)
Date: 6/8/2012 1:46:00 PM
A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry today Samia. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/8/2012 2:08:00 PM
Hey Carol, Thank you or your comment and beautiful thoughts! Have a great weekend! :)

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