Snow Angels

Giggling children fall to the snow in laughter ....snow angels appear.

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/11/2011 9:10:00 PM

I have a lot of snow angels falling outside right now. Your senryu describes them well.

James Fraser

Date: 12/18/2010 2:46:00 PM

This is what snow was created for by nature, too bring children and adults much fun >> James :)

David Smalling

Date: 12/9/2010 4:55:00 AM

Awesome imagery ... your love for children and for nature glows like the sun radiating my heart with your poem and fun.

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/8/2010 1:04:00 PM

great imagery...reminds me of my girls when the snow first hits! Lay..

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/8/2010 1:04:00 PM

great imagery...reminds me of my girls when the snow first hits! Lay..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/7/2010 8:32:00 AM

It was so much fun to picture these playful children frolicking in the snow, Francine. You brought back some great memories. Thank you! Love, Carolyn