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Rising up from slumbers ready to tolerate life's dilemmas Recalling back when I was just a kid, I was fearless Hiking through the snow on glacial pavements Participating with other youth and the childhood amazement Watching the sky powder all Winter long over us People with the flu and others saying what's the fuss Skiing along the snow on frosty concrete Feeling jovial and declare that life is complete These days we don't see any winter wonderlands Strolled on the beach, noticing the icy sands Once I was ten years old lying in the snow Throwing slush at a crowd putting on a show We can all dream to have a time like this again Pray to god saying a prayer, Amen I felt once I was in an undiscovered place called Paradise But now all we suffer is prevailing ice

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Date: 2/28/2016 4:01:00 PM
Beautiful rhyme Syran:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/28/2016 3:54:00 PM
Sryan,, wow... It's like freezing over at the end of your poem... Awesome metaphor... Linda
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