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Slumbering, I dreamed that Sugar crystals drifted Softly from pink sky till Sunrise, when I awoke. Sweetness greeted my eyes. Sifted by angels, it Shimmered in winter’s dawn. Written Nov. 19, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/7/2020 10:49:00 PM
Andrea, This is so lovely - soft as snowflakes falling. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/1/2015 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea!
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:48:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Andrea... lovely pic.. congrats on ur first place win!!
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Date: 11/29/2015 1:17:00 PM
Thanks for the great picture, poem too. Love, daver
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Date: 11/29/2015 8:23:00 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 11/29/2015 7:23:00 AM
Congrats to win the first place. Nice composition with nice photograph. wonderfully done. Anisha D
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Date: 11/28/2015 9:35:00 PM
Sweet poem and placement Andrea...your falling snow picture is entrancing :)
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Date: 11/28/2015 6:33:00 PM
Andrea, this is such a beautiful sight! Congrats on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:22:00 PM
WOW, you just made winter sound so pleasing... Impressed... Andrea, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE
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Date: 11/28/2015 7:08:00 AM
Angels sifting snow.. how lovely....congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 11/28/2015 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea
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Date: 11/27/2015 11:04:00 PM
Congrats on first place excellent poem. JDH
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Date: 11/27/2015 8:26:00 PM
Andrea, I like the subject you chose imagery is beautiful , congratulations on your 1st place win. Eve
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Date: 11/27/2015 5:06:00 PM
sweet 7 for you congratulations to you.. and I'm givin myself props for being under you on this same list as yourself, along with Constance and so many others from the top of our community...:), jill
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Date: 11/27/2015 5:06:00 PM
I am not surprised to see this in the top spot Andrea! Excellent. Congratulations on your wonderful win. I wanted to write a poem for this contest but ran out of time. I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving. Hugs, Connie
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:45:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/27/2015 3:14:00 PM
Andrea, so glad you entered my contest! I loved the imagery in this! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, KIm
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Date: 11/23/2015 9:04:00 AM
Andrea, beautifully penned, and a lovely image, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 11/22/2015 5:31:00 PM
Lovely image, and a cosy feel. Nice piece of writing. As for Haibun-Freeastyle, if the bit that follows the prose looks like a poem, or even smells like a poem, then it's in. So go for it, create away.
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:19:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Andie. Loved the gif as well. Thanks for everything. hugs!
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:46:00 PM
I loved your entry Andrea, especially your ending. Congratulations on your win with this beauty. It was a top winner in my book!
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Date: 11/21/2015 4:01:00 AM
Soft and sweet, just like the words of your poem. Congratulations, Andrea.
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:46:00 AM
Beautifully penned Andrea - this would fit Kim's contest too:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/21/2015 12:01:00 AM
How lovely Andrea .. congrats on awesome win!
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:18:00 PM
Andrea, to use photos with your poems contact Soup headquarters (email) and should give you directions. I've done this before with them and they've been very helpful. Lovely poem, but I hate snow. /M
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