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Snow

Furiously the flakes fell, thickly coating all they touched, breaking branches with their weight. Yet still relentlessly the snow cascaded seemingly ever thicker. Freezing temperatures with icy fingers that turned all they touched into frozen statues. Ponds with ice two feet thick encouraging the skaters to swirl, twirl and circle freely. Flurry huge flakes that formed deep drifts some topping out at fifteen feet barriers. Suffocating sheep and many others with its cold relentless arms of purpose. For now Winter reins in supremacy killing of the weak sending some into hibernation seeking relief from the biting bitter cold. Furnaces blaze and their flames dance throwing out some warmth and comfort, bringing a reminder that soon Spring will once more walk our lands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/22/2015 10:17:00 AM
While reading this one, I had to throw a blanket around my shoulders !! Brrr !! And ps.......thank you very much Shadow, for my placement in another snow challenge!! An honor it is to place!
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Date: 11/21/2015 9:50:00 AM
Again, a wonderful poem, Shadow. Winter is coming and those that are out in the elements do take its total on their lives especially the elderly and the homeless.
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Date: 11/20/2015 7:38:00 PM
Shadow, so beautifully penned, you captured snow wonderfully, and I want to thank you for my fine placement in your Snow contest, I am honored ~
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Constance La France
Date: 11/20/2015 7:39:00 PM
Winter can be both beautiful and dangerous ~
Date: 11/19/2015 5:16:00 AM
Vivid imagery and I love the alliteration - the bit about the sheep suffocating hit home hard as this happened on a huge scale here in the winter of 2012:-( hugs Jan xx
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