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Snow

There has been a dark shadow In my world of light It has engulfed and consumed all of me In my time it has left me cold and bitter And blinded my sight from the light Now that I look back on the path that I made And the all consuming shadow that I made I notice it has faded into the past This path I had made In my shadow I was alone Not understanding I was the foe Until you started to walk in the snow I felt every flake flow with a glow Now I look back on my world All I see are flakes of snow Flowing from the heavens with love Showing me things from above Thank you for being my snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/20/2011 6:43:00 AM
Thanks for your comment :) Your poems are really good, I very much like the way you write.
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Date: 6/18/2011 4:18:00 AM
Thanks for your comments, only right that I return the favor. I like the flow of your poem very well written, keep writing.... shannon
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