Snow

When first it fell - all powdery white I loved it. Skipped playfully making snowmen Throwing snowballs Giggling youthfully Took a million photographs Went on Facebook Told my stories Listened to theirs And then the thaw came Fell painfully Slush saturated Older stiffer Confidence gone I dream of summer

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Ken Colonsay

Date: 1/12/2011 5:40:00 PM

Snow is fun for the kids of all ages but drivers hate it ... let it snow, let it snow, let it snow! First fallen snow, snow melting, it's all snow! :-) Liked this poem! ken

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/26/2010 11:37:00 AM

Liz, your write gave me a look at snow from a child's point of view and from an adult when the playfulness has worn off.. enjoyed this ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/19/2010 7:58:00 AM

Never experienced snow but your write makes me think I'd feel the same way about it-- ;) very nice write, Liz -- nikko :)

Carol Fillmore

Date: 12/9/2010 9:18:00 AM

Liz, Love this! really identify with the older stiffer line! lol Thanks for your comment on "In Winter" very appreciated! Carol