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Snow 1

SNOW Alluring, bewitching, cool, delight Entrenching freeze Glacier’s heady invite Joking, kicking, loose. Mystic no-no’s, Orhan Pamuk’s Quiet ‘read’-‘ SNOW’ Telling, unique. Virgin waters XO’s,.. yawn, ..zzz… S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 26 mar 12 For Yasmin's SNOW-ABC

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/21/2012 9:57:00 PM

Jag, I tho't you have NEVER seen snow?...Or did u say u saw it in Kalcutta (sp?) ...great fun you 2 Indians writing of fantastic things like this...I don't think Yas has ever seen snow either...Yes, Julian and I are back from our bday sushi outing...A grand time! Thanks for wishing him well on his bday! Email. Gwendolen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/4/2012 1:38:00 AM

I love your original abc.. a well deserved win Jag

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2012 10:21:00 AM

woohoo, jag.. congrats on your terrfific win in yas' contest!..:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/30/2012 8:31:00 AM

Yes, I choose an eerie topic, but it is one that causes me to question EVERYTHING in my life...my purpose, my creator, and why others who say they are "good" just sit around and let hell avenge the innocent! It is my fav time period in history...Some say that it was America's greatest hour,,,I say we could have done MORE! The entire Jewish nation and others could have been wiped off the map if it weren't for the US. Heartbreaking, really. Glad u asked. :) GR

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/30/2012 6:32:00 AM

I must live in the same area as Gwen as snow passed us by and we got up to 80 this last week and tonight the forecast is for frost just as the bees are to visit the fruit blossoms. I didn't know you got snow over there; sure sounds like fun!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/29/2012 8:34:00 PM

Hi dear Jag!! I see you rocked the arctic contest with this blusterous write!...I am really proud of this entry...heck, I couldn't even come up with anything! Everything you wrote of is an enticing treat associated with the wondrous white powdery stuff! Way to go! In my state, I am not exaggerating, we received 2 good days of snow! That's it...It's as tho Mr. Winter passed me by...wahhhhhhhh! :) Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2012 8:58:00 AM

congrats on your placement

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2012 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement Jag. Love, Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 3/29/2012 2:14:00 AM

Excellent poem written in ABC form. I love it. Thank you for sharing.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/29/2012 1:09:00 AM

Excellent Jag, a worthy winner xx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/28/2012 2:32:00 PM

Very clever. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/28/2012 2:03:00 PM

A big Congratulations on your win in this contest. A splendid deserving win for you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2012 1:48:00 PM

congrats Jag on a great big win luv for this amazing ABC on snow.. an alluring write ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2012 8:58:00 PM

I agree with Robert here, this is quite a creative approach here!! XO's yawn zzzz. hahaha Need a no-doze snows!!! Fun read, Joey!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2012 10:08:00 AM

an awesome and fantastic fascinating journey into snow Jag.. good luck in contest.. yes.. nothing ever gets me down luv.. so keep pressing forward.. thankxx for your sweet and kind words and concern luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/27/2012 7:47:00 AM

Someone once sponsored an ABC contest on this site and insisted that the poem had to be a complete sentence...I had researched this thoroughly and found that NOT to be the case only after I threw out one of my best written ABC poems...This one is excellent, Jag. It places a twist on the theme and is Oh so original..I like the ending how you pulled the audience to a quiet sleep...a super nice alluring flow. Glad I got to read this one before starting off for the day!! :) Gwendolen

M.I.A .

Date: 3/26/2012 8:15:00 PM

interesting poem, Jag. you have an unique way of deciphering the world/existence into a play/life. ps. i'm not Japanese, just a fan of the tradition.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2012 12:42:00 PM

what a smooth read, jag...really lovely,, best to you and hugggs! :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/26/2012 9:45:00 AM

Well done, Jag. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/26/2012 4:37:00 AM

Well done - luck to you in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise